Would have been great

This had a lot of good camera angles and an okay story, as well as the advertisement at the end. It would have been heaps better if you could draw and animate well, and if you could put in voices (sucks that your mic doesn't work - you should ask someone to do voices for you.)

Like I said, the angles were good and the story wasn't bad. If you try long enough, you could draw and animate a lot better and do a remake of this movie.

YAWN

It's your first flash, so I give it 1/10 to dishearten you.

FULL VERSION PLEASE

I GIVE YOU TEN SO AS TO ENCOURAGE YOU TO MAKE FULL VERSION thank you :~)

LOVES

I LOVES IT

NO STORYLINE

WHERE'S THE PLOT? WHERE'S THE CHARACTERS? THAT CATERPILLER DOESN'T QUALIFY.